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by Anonymous11/18/14

This point of view never works in a story, and its not romance, erotic couplings at best.

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by Anonymous11/18/14

could be...

It's fun fiction. I believe first person works fine. Maybe it's a bit over the top, but aren't all our fantasys? Erotic couplings, sure, but that's to be expected really..

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