Love the play banter back and forth between them. I knew he had her. Just a matter of the right words. Gosh brought back some great memories for me.. benefits like these go with any meal.. Thanks for the story
Fairly good story seemed pretty real. I think a bit longer and more depth of the seduction would have made it better. But all in all nice job
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Breakfast with dessert
Love the play banter back and forth between them. I knew he had her. Just a matter of the right words. Gosh brought back some great memories for me.. benefits like these go with any meal.. Thanks for the story
Breakfast
Fairly good story seemed pretty real. I think a bit longer and more depth of the seduction would have made it better. But all in all nice job
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