All Comments on 'Naked Souls Ch. 03'

Few mistakes of grammar and word usage, but overall quite good. Some sentences could be reworked to better effect.

This story is so well written. Coming from the perspective of the woman, a middle aged woman who has lost her confidence but finds it though a 22 year old young man. So many of these are FemDom stories, full of male humiliation, but this story is tender. He gets the thrill that he needs and she finally gets the same, scared to death, but she does it anyway and finds a new life after everything else falls apart. I wish I had written this story. Heck, I wish I was the guy!

Linda that's living, hope you find another Josh. Then there is always summer break. You knew more than you gave yourself credit for, you are as satisfied as I am for going all the way down. Can I call you.......Spunky *~*