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MIKES SLUT
Would be fun to-be used by Mike any time he wants, love it up my boi pussy and in the mouth YUM,YUM
Turrrible
This story, ugh. The capitalization, punctuation, and spelling errors were not unnoticeable. The whole thing was rushed and felt so amateuristic. Read more so you'll learn to write better. And yes my misspelling of terrible was an ironic joke.
Be your 'cleaner'
Love to suck your cock as Mike fucks your arse... Lick his cock clean once he cums... Spread your arse cheeks and lick you clean... My fingers buried in my wet pussy... My finger covered in Mike's cum and your arse juice rubbing my clit... And watch Mike take you again....and again...mmmm
Don't write porn if writing sucks
Seriously, how do you expect anyone to get off with such poor writing?
Grammar suck but so do you
I loved your story. You can always improve your grammar and spelling but you already are something fabulous. A cock slut, just think of all the experiences you can have and imagine and then write about. Keep the stories going about all the cocks you will take in that lovely smooth shaven body.
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