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Lucy's Transition to a New Level

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by amh197011/18/14

Trash

Please stop writing this is total trash...

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by Anonymous11/18/14

It doesn't seem like Bdsm

This seems more like abuse than Bdsm, if he thought anything about your feelings, he would let your body have chance to heal, should be at least 6 weeks before sex, there is a risk to your health and also all this can't be good for a baby, you need energy to care for a child and so rest and eating properly is important. Just my opinion but there doesn't seem to be any love or real care

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by Anonymous11/24/14

right on

Hi, I like your fresh take on power play. This is just the stuff that turns me on and is almost always left out in boring fetishized BDSM. Sex is about subtlety and ambivalence. The first part was very subtle, indeed. When will you write part three?

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