an intake of breath

Ha! You should put in a line about no backseat seat driving to complement the line about steering the wheel.
5

rechaka ......kumbhaka .......inhale .......exhale ........Excellent

Butters ......this poem is all 'bout Pranayama ! 5-ed .

maybe but

It's about allowing yourself to be loved without reservation and also to a lesser degree faith, trust, and acceptance and I think it's just lovely.

Happy Birthday 2015 Love

Love this poem and how you express the way we hold each other in our hearts, and if I'd sent a birthday card this year I couldn't think of a better sentiment than the one you wrote
your mister xx

Of course there is!

butters that is a great poem and you should write some more