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Not a happy tale
But I hoped you enjoyed it. A big thanks to gyfurune for his helpful reading. I counted at least three bugaboos that slipped through, but I take full blame for those.
Comments welcome. What helps most is if you like something or don't like something, give me specifics; tell me what worked for you or what didn't. Thanks!
"Sigh"
You are right about it being not a happy tale. However I can say as someone who has an adopted brother much like the way the sisters are I can understand the feelings of love between the two. I can also say they are and were better than my brother and I due to being able to put the safety of their town before the hatred that one feels towards the one who hurt your family.
Thank you for a heart warming but sad tale.
A Southern Gentleman.
Don't finish yet
Nice tale. Is this the end? It indeed has all the potential to become much greater.
Not the end
There are several other stories that need to get put down yet, and many of those are related to House Sorena. Those are in the works.
At the moment, though, my attention is on finishing chapter 9 of Starlight Gleaming.
Thanks for the feedback!
wow
thats good.
More?
This was great, but where is "Dayanna of House Sorena"?? I'm hooked now...
Teasers... I feel like each of your posted story is just to toy with the reader...
Just enough to drive us mad!
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