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Until #$&%@ Do Us Part Literally Ch. 01

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by jaybird810011/27/14

Thought provoking and way too real, this story is even a bit scary for me :)

The words written here I have no doubt are factual, I smile,even laughed but also felt the hairs stand up on the back of my neck and shed some great crocodile tears because a friend was being taken advantage of and was led down a path of false hope by someone she had professed her love to. It's my observation SJP was just a female for a man to take out his sexual desires on, to express how he was there to protect her but in reality had a hard time of letting anyone pierce the shinny coat of ego and self fascination he had. Makes me wonder why those with an abusive background go for those who physically, mentally or monetarily abuse them all the more. At least Susan was smart enough to get professional help to overcome the depressing situation. Being a person who has known since they were 12 that I'd not be capable of providing a family to that special lady, I have always emphasized this very early in a relationship as to not cause any hard feelings or false hope. To have a vasectomy on the sly tells me they were not interested in a positive relationship at all.
It will be interesting to see what the continuation brings, for chapter one, it's entirely deserving of the 5 stars given along with being a favorite. Great entry Susan-more please! Smiling Jaybird :)

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by rightbank11/28/14

cold

an interesting prologue.
What might be coming has me a bit frightened.

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by fantasiahottie12/30/14

Wow!!

Great start, can't wait to see where it goes from here!

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