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Mine Ch. 02: Conclusion

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by Anonymous

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by Anonymous11/21/14

hate this magic dick stories

Yet another story about the guy with the magic dick..possibly written by a single man that can only relates with the basic instinc off having sex controlling you...women are so much complicated...it is not new to know that you can make a woman come given the correct stimuli and some well applied friction...but to have a woman submit willingly just because of that....because of something that can be accomplished by a finger or a battery power instrument....no...it is not worth the trouble...it has to be more..futher more...women doesn't like to be called on their shit...this is the real deal..any married man would know that..this is a fantasy...a common one...for men..but anoying for women.

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by Anonymous11/21/14

Hot Story

I loved your story. It was sexy and erotic.

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by Anonymous11/21/14

Very hot.... ;)

A good story, but I had to go back and reread chapter 1. It has taken you three years to complete it, what took you so long? I must congratulate you though for finishing your story, as there is many authors on here that haven't. :)

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by DarkAlleyGirl11/24/14

Thanks!

I just wanted to say thanks for the feedback. To answer your question, it took so long to post it because Literotica wouldn't approve the way I had the story laid out. I attempted to submit it in 3 chapters and they wouldn't approve it. It took a while, but it finally was posted.

Thanks for the sweet comments...glad you guys enjoyed the story.

As for the previous comment, I can understand your plight, although I think it's highly unfair to berate me and my story simply because you're tired of reading these kinds of stories. Why read them in the first place if you don't enjoy them?

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by Anonymous02/24/15

How can you say why continue to read these type of stories when you dont like them? You dont know how the story is until you actually read it to begin with and unless you label your story as magic dick how are we suppose to know.

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