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by Anonymous

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by Anonymous11/26/14

Nice story

I liked your story, I hope more will follow

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by Anonymous11/26/14

Great start.

You have an excellent ear for humiliation. Hope you continue it for her first fuck as a slave.

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by Anonymous11/27/14

Good...

Please continue the story, maybe more characters and more development of the characters.

thanks

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by gypsiecowboy12/07/14

this

is a fantastic story and nearly perfectly written... now I want u to come knocking on My door to apply for a job... right here in River City...

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