From Terra Ch. 16

Not long enough! lol

You always leave me wanting more :) Good chapter and eagerly awaiting the next.

I agree more. I have a feeling that this is headed in the direction that Xaynder will want to take her as his mate

I don't think "mate" yet, but at least his personal concubine. I think that may take a while though because he'd have to buy her and she's probably getting more expensive by the minute. I also think that could become a link to finding her brother. But I think we'd have to see concubine then transition to own free person before we find her brother. Or perhaps we'll lose Lord Plath once we're all attached and then find him again. Like Fanny Hill, Memoirs of Geisha, etc. But I do like reading this story. I quite liked Brik too. Please let them be rivals!

if your going to write short chapters

then you need to post more often

*smiles*
I love this chapter. Gotta love good anger sex. *chuckles* I'm very excited to see what will happen when Zyander goes to talk to Matron and what the fallout for Chyrssa will be. Thanks for another great chapter!

Just Amazing!

This was too short. Really left me hanging, wanting more. Can't wait for next chapter.

wonderful-- thank you :)

Very hot give it to me, take it and like it sex story. Wished very much for two or more pages, but understand your very busy. An creativity like this has to be honed. Looking so forward to the next installment...

I just love those two together.

Looking forward to more.

Brilliant!!!! :)

This is just too delicious for words. Love it, love it, love it, what more can I say? So, will Lord Plath be taking Chryssa away from House Exotica. He should do, if he wants to make sure that no other alien is going to use her. Can't wait for chapter 17. :)

Still need more

Is Lord plath going to claim her as his own?? I think so. Need next chapter asap please

Fantastic

Can't wait for the nest instalment. You are a great writer and this story has completely hooked me. You should be getting a higher score!!

love you

Love your work and always checking eagerly for the next update

More

Please update this again soon, it's amazing

Update please :D

Fantastic writing as always, update as soon as because I can't wait to see their relationship develop further. I really hope he buys her for himself ;)

It's Coming Soon!

Hello readers, I'm sorry it's taking me so long to write the next chapter for this Lit series... I'm on a deadline for my next book in my Stronghold series which I'm trying to get published before I leave for vacation next week... and well, books on sale get precedence over my free stories (esp when I've announced a release date... ack!). I'm almost done with the book though, so I should be able to get right back on top of finishing this series very soon! It's got about 4 more chapters to go (give or take) and I'm REALLY excited about what's going to happen... I hope you're all looking forward to it as well!

Excited

So excited for what's going to happen in the last few chapters. Gonna miss this story though, it's great :)

Beutiful

Great story, just got back to the site and another 2 chapters ready, how lovely

Yummm

"You need a keeper," he murmured, licking just beneath her earlobe. "Someone to watch over you, and fuck you often like the little cock-hungry slut you are."

Best lines of the story so far. I wish I could sprinkle that mentality on my own partner and watch it grow. Lol