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One Night Ch. 01: Trip to the Club

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by Anonymous

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by Anonymous11/21/14

Yawn

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by Anonymous11/21/14

Sorry, but the immaturity that comes across from them both at the start made me stop reading.

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by Anonymous11/23/14

Not good.

No one would leave a friend on their 21st and leaving a club at sunset? The whole this was terribly written.

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