I love these over the top stories. I especially like stories with the unknowing father and reluctant mother. Can't wait for chapter 3. Would like to see a mom/son shower with dad outside the door talking to one of them, or maybe dad on the phone while mom and son go at it. But whatever you decide to do will most likely be great.
Your story is very hot.. I am following every word... more please
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Anonymous01/17/15
So hot!!!
Please keep going!!! But try to leave accountant out of it. She's all for her son!
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Anonymous01/18/15
Amazing!
I loved both chapters, but mostly because of the shenanigans and reluctance. Don't fuck this story up by putting in phrases like, "I love you." Keep it pornographic.
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Anonymous01/19/15
The reluctance and slow build up is a good thing. Write another one about a son persuading his reluctant mom to give him a blowjob or one about a son making an innocent bet with his mom that she thinks shes confident she will definitely win so he jokingly bets her that if he wins then she has to give him a blowjob.
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Anonymous01/23/15
More Please!!
I love the story so far. I can hardly wait for the next chapter.
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Anonymous02/02/15
The People Want It! Please Continue!
Great idea! Funny, clever, and still wildly hot! Please for the love of God! Keep going!
Keep it Cumming . A continuation would be greatly appreciated...Do not leave it hanging and disappear..
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Anonymous02/22/15
Keep it HOT HOT HOT
You should definitely keep writing atleast a few more chapters this is sooooo hot. And maybe even have the son fuck the secratary with the big boobs and the mom.
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Anonymous03/05/15
Yes!
I'd like another chapter, but honestly loadedgun just keep writing stories and I'll be happy.
Gotta say I love your stories man! Been re-reading all of them throughout the years and I'm glad that you finally wrote more! Love your style of writing and the innocence of the characters! Hope you keep on churning out these masterpieces!
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Anonymous07/15/15
You write great stories!! Pretty please write one involving a mom and son Watching a sporting event and betting against each other for innocent things. Then the mom thinks she has it in the bag and so does the son, so she ups the anti a but more trying to get him to do more chores. He agrees and jokingly bets that if he wins she "has to give him a blowjob." She was shocked but reluctantly agreed because she thought inks she is for sure going to win. Somehow the sons team wins and they are both shocked. The son cheering and the mom in disbelief. She says she wasn't serious about the bet, but the son makes it clear that a bet us a bet and he keeps persuading her to do it. He somehow convinces her and she so reluctantly goes through with it. He gets her to take her top off somehow too. And he gives her a huge "accidental" facial. She gets very upset and angry but he yet again somehow convinces her to let him take a picture of her. I know you can make it a great story. We will all love it!!!
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I do.
I love it. Keep it going.
can't wait for more! hurry please!
more
Keep going...
Plz continue
More
risky sex is best sex
man, this situation here was absolutely absurd. i jerked off anyway. keep writing!
You really need to continue this story its great . Keep up the good work . So far iv greatly enjoyed all your stories
great
I love these over the top stories. I especially like stories with the unknowing father and reluctant mother. Can't wait for chapter 3. Would like to see a mom/son shower with dad outside the door talking to one of them, or maybe dad on the phone while mom and son go at it. But whatever you decide to do will most likely be great.
very nice
just like i said after reading the first cant wait for the next chapter
really enjoyed the series
more please, don't go too insane with the unbelievability, right now its on teetering on the border.
Please continue,
wow ! cant wait till the new chapter released! please make it many chapters or longer, thanks alots!
Great Work!!!
Please continue this!
Very Good 5 Stars
Please another chapter or three..... you are on a good roll.......
WOW WOW WOW
Amazing story!!
oh yes.. so hot. more please
Your story is very hot.. I am following every word... more please
So hot!!!
Please keep going!!! But try to leave accountant out of it. She's all for her son!
Amazing!
I loved both chapters, but mostly because of the shenanigans and reluctance. Don't fuck this story up by putting in phrases like, "I love you." Keep it pornographic.
The reluctance and slow build up is a good thing. Write another one about a son persuading his reluctant mom to give him a blowjob or one about a son making an innocent bet with his mom that she thinks shes confident she will definitely win so he jokingly bets her that if he wins then she has to give him a blowjob.
More Please!!
I love the story so far. I can hardly wait for the next chapter.
The People Want It! Please Continue!
Great idea! Funny, clever, and still wildly hot! Please for the love of God! Keep going!
Next Installment Please
Keep it Cumming . A continuation would be greatly appreciated...Do not leave it hanging and disappear..
Keep it HOT HOT HOT
You should definitely keep writing atleast a few more chapters this is sooooo hot. And maybe even have the son fuck the secratary with the big boobs and the mom.
Yes!
I'd like another chapter, but honestly loadedgun just keep writing stories and I'll be happy.
Gotta say I love your stories man! Been re-reading all of them throughout the years and I'm glad that you finally wrote more! Love your style of writing and the innocence of the characters! Hope you keep on churning out these masterpieces!
You write great stories!! Pretty please write one involving a mom and son Watching a sporting event and betting against each other for innocent things. Then the mom thinks she has it in the bag and so does the son, so she ups the anti a but more trying to get him to do more chores. He agrees and jokingly bets that if he wins she "has to give him a blowjob." She was shocked but reluctantly agreed because she thought inks she is for sure going to win. Somehow the sons team wins and they are both shocked. The son cheering and the mom in disbelief. She says she wasn't serious about the bet, but the son makes it clear that a bet us a bet and he keeps persuading her to do it. He somehow convinces her and she so reluctantly goes through with it. He gets her to take her top off somehow too. And he gives her a huge "accidental" facial. She gets very upset and angry but he yet again somehow convinces her to let him take a picture of her. I know you can make it a great story. We will all love it!!!
Please continue this series
Please continue this series.
We want it!
We want it! C'mon, get to writing!
I'll never be able to hear that song without thinking of this story
Even so, I loved the story. Keep writing more!
more write
people want it
yes keep it going
it is a fun one mom really got into it and loved her son's size
where is number 3???? come on im your biggest fan.
Make it please.
Fantastic
The story started great in chapter 1 and got crazy in chapter 2. It was so much fun.
pleasseeee morreeee of these kind
whewwwwww :)
Where's more!!!!!!
Anymore coming?!!!
Excellent
Excellent.
GREAT story!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Congrats ;)
more
more please great story
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