that is a hot story about a start of a Dom/sub relationship. It shows me that this can happen out of the blue, but need the right place and time and also 2 partners who want the same from different points.
5 stars from me!
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Anonymous11/23/14
good story
but if you do a 2nd chapter he should definitely fuck her ass, dump a load of sperm in her ass, and have her do ass-to-mouth, also exhibitionism - she wears see-through clothing with no underwear, when they are out in public.
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Anonymous11/23/14
Hot story
I really liked your story. It was very exciting but you really need to do a better job of proofreading before you submit.
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wish I wud be on your place ... grin
that is a hot story about a start of a Dom/sub relationship. It shows me that this can happen out of the blue, but need the right place and time and also 2 partners who want the same from different points.
5 stars from me!
good story
but if you do a 2nd chapter he should definitely fuck her ass, dump a load of sperm in her ass, and have her do ass-to-mouth, also exhibitionism - she wears see-through clothing with no underwear, when they are out in public.
Hot story
I really liked your story. It was very exciting but you really need to do a better job of proofreading before you submit.
A great introduction to a new writer's talents
That was very good, 13Irish13, and thank you for sharing it with us. Welcome to Literotica and I hope you will write much more for us. Five stars.
Love this!
Great, wouldn't change a thing!!
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