Grow A Pair

Juvenile at best.

Childish on so many levels.

If you say so

Perhaps you needed to vent.

Wow, what a story...

... Grow a pair, huh? I guess that the old saying goes double, or maybe quadruple, in this case. Careful what you wish for because you just might get it. Good story that, with a little more depth, could've definitely been great. 4 stars.

Not worth my time

That's five minutes of my life wasted.

5*

One of the best BTB

simple decisive real

all the cucks out there, and cuck wannabees should learn every act in life has its rewards and cost. Being a cuck is a cost of not being a man. There are way to many single women out there that want to be married to a man to keep one that only wants a man to pay her bills so she can fuck around.

the btb crowd will love it!

Secret military husbands, who is also a kung fu master. Wives who are fucking morons. Husband who is completely unappreciated and underestimated despite his brilliance and perfection. Villains who are dumber than the wife who, to repeat myself, is extraordinarily dumb. The immedistely repentant wife. The dumb bad guys with an even dumber plan. If only there was a mustang or a big titied replacement for the ex wife, I would have had btb story bingo!

I would suggest adding those to your next story as well as the husband becoming a millionaire and everyone killing else killing themselves or aids. This could be a 6 star story in the works!

5* read

Another new author. Good.

Hopefully more will be on the way.

5 Stars!

Keep em coming!

Loved It!

This story was too short. I'm sure that the candy ass dick less cucks hate it. There definitely needs to be more stories like this. I hate the cock sucking wimp stories that dominate this site. If you don't like my comments, as one commenter once said, address your complaints to the Sultan of Brunei. 5 stars

BRAVO!!!

Best story I've ever read here regarding a slut wife! Please do more! A BITCH DON"T CONTROL SHIT!!!!

Many Will Like

Many will like this story it was promising at the start, I thought this is a different approach to a storyline but for me it quickly went downhill. The company policy angle and an employee forced to suck cock and cleaning their wives after sex just to keep their job, it went from the sublime to the ridiculous, the basic idea was good but it could have been so much better. Keep writing with more thought to credibility.

Probably

would have been a solid story, but you overdid it with the plot device of Greg's background. You could have had each manager scheduled an hour apart so Greg could have handled them separately and with less criminal conduct. That way you would not have had to make all three managers too blind not to see the chains on the doors. Just think logic when you write your next scenes. Good start overall!

4.22

That is the current rating for this story.

No, seriously.

Wow

Wow. I am surprised and amazed at what passes as a 4 star story on this site. Apparently you get 4 stars if the readers can live vicariously through an emotionless sadist who burns the earth around him when he gets hurt.

I just gave it a 5 sol the score should go up!

fuck you brain dead assholes annony!!

amazed @ what pases for 2 star fairie tale

1 star

fun

Awww, who cares what the naysayer's whine about. I got a kick out of it.

Part of creating a good story means grounding it in some semblance of reality.

Interesting burn the bitch story

A fairy tale, wife can't be that stupid! He had the stupid video , that is all he needed. The rest is pure garbage ,just over kill for me. The video was enough to destroy them and. The physical part of beating the crap out of them is not believable even with his training. Just sue there asses off and post the video on line and send a copy to all customers . Etc divorce that dumber than dumb wife . And move on. Now hell probably have a assalt and battery charge to deal with. Just a feel good story for those BTB women haters .

The violence was over the top but it was one of the few BTB's I've enjoyed and the only one I've given 5 stars.

Like I said, it was over the top and it would have been sufficient to simply destroy the company in a lawsuit of epic proportions while divorcing his wife.

But I did enjoy the ending.

WOW someone manning up.

Love it. Better than all that Gay Married men crap that keeps showing up. Please keep writing.

Excellent

Whoopee. The cucks don't rule the henhouse. The swingers don't have the upper hand. And the normal hard working men who love their wives unconditionally without thoughts of other women can hold their heads up high. You want to get off watching your wife get gang banged, screwing others while you watch or having anonymous sex with strangers, good for you. To each his own. But for us men who live a normal life and have a wife who they love and cherish and would hate seeing them cheat, good for us. For us men who need to have revenge and retribution against a worthless cheating cunt, good for us. This tale shows a man who was violent and calmed himself for ten years showing what happens when the beast was awakened. He didn't ask for it, but he responded thusly.
This tale is for us btb guys. If you don't care for it, don't read it. I won't read your swinging or cuck tales. Deal?


Five Stars

Nah, to predictable.

Somewhat over the top, but if compared to the swinging/willing cuckold tales praised by the cuckies like swingerjoe and frontlinecaster this is a masterpiece. The cuckies will give this a 1* rating, the same score we give to their stories. It's even isn't it? LMAO

dumb

Unrealistic

Liked it a lot...

...unrealistic? Perhaps, but becoming a company-wimp would have been even more so. Unrealistic of course his wife - no woman could possibly be that stupid. On the other hand: It is just a story...fiction. Anyway: I enjoyed reading and laughing. Thanks. 5*

The author is clearly a repressed homosexual.

He fantasizes about me sucking dicks and hurting women.

Unrealistic?

Seriously? On this site? I am so disillusioned.

PLEASE

Post this silly crap in non erotic where it belongs.

bad story

A guy who had been in the Marines leading men wouldn't be considered a nice guy as a manager,and wouldn't put up with being held back.More importantly, he wouldn't need to get violent,those videos would have guaranteed him freedom from his wife,and also the three aholes would be in jail ,and he filthy rich.Not to mention his,actions could get him put in jail,locking the door like that and not letting them leave would get him time in jail

Flash revenge . . .

Hard to believe wife did not know husbands background and deeper personality. But it was a great story about bullies who think mite makes right. Nice vigilante justice!

Enjoyed the first effort!

Hey man,

Really liked your first-time story on Lit. Over the top and way too unrealistic? Sure but it was fun. Would love to see you develop your characters more in your next story. It'll make your readers care about the characters more than just their actions.

Would also like to see you plug some holes in your storylines. Example, in this one just a line or three explaining why Jenny was so stupid, or why the bosses thought they could treat Greg like that or get away with that kind of 'company' policy. Things like that would've made the story better.

Anyway, looking forward to your next offering.

Pathetic

A cartoonish, adolescent revenge fantasy, written in the style of a 14-year-old whose girlfriend just broke up with him...and the fucking slobbering idiots in the BTB gang hoot and holler like a bunch of shit-hurling chimpanzees.

The most pathetic part of this story is the legion of sad, bitter, impotent, insecure, misogynist little pencil dicks who visit an erotic website to jerk their tiny cocks to stories like this. Guys like betrayedbylove just make me sad. What a miserable life he must have.

No rating from me. This waste of pixels doesn't deserve one.

Wife got away with what she did.

He should have beat the wife too.
5 STARS

From Duna (An answer to "Executive Privilege")

I gave 5***** against I think the true revenge to find a better woman instead of a cheating wife after the divorce. I gave 5***** in every sexual majority story untill there will be a "Marriage Affairs" hub. This sexual majority husband story is an answer to the "Executives Privilege" from Keat. If you read that serial "Executives Privilege", you will understand this story's over the top plot................Yes I agree over the top plot , but you had read "Executive Privilege", dear readers you would understand this story better.........

BTB

I had to comment again. This was only a story. All of you who don't like what you read, then write a better story. Men and women who cheat on their spouses should get the treatment like Mike, Jim and Harry. PERIOD!

Re. DUNA's comment

"I gave 5***** in every sexual majority story untill there will be a "Marriage Affairs" hub."

And that, right there, reaffirms the point I have been making for a while now. The ratings in this category are meaningless, thanks to guys like DUNA who rate stories based on the morality of the characters in the story, and not the actual content and quality of the writing.

At this point, why have a ratings system at all?

Good resolution to a incredible setup

Not a credible scenario in today's litigious society. Might have been credible in, say, 1955. However, perps did reap the consequences for their arrogant stupidity. If you like BTB, than this one is for you.

Very good story...

Very good story...They all had what they deserved...maybe they should have been beaten a little more...All cheaters deserve this kind of things...How stupid can be a wife?

Stupid cunt? Stupid story!

Highly overrated!
Sorry for wasting my time reading it...

Whaa??

Very weird and slightly confusing. Why the heck did the cuckold hubby want those men to bone his wife in front of him? Why did they fight against it? Also what was with the jumble of names during the fight? Too many odd questions makes for a questionable story even if it is fictional. 3/5.

The wife was a cheating fool and the coworkers were arrogant assholes. He put them all down. People who are all concerned about the level of violence should consider what was done to him. Can you imagine this kind of thing really happening at a business? Probably not, so it is VERY excessive. People get in fights for very silly things and do serious damage to others. Here, Greg was really treated badly and he punched out 3 people who attacked him. Yes, he set them up but they did attack him. Their arrogance was punished and the wife's stupidity was dealt with. Like a thief who ends up in jail for 10 years, maybe they have learned not to be assholes. In 6 months they will have healed up and only the humiliation will remain. It doesn't seem that extreme all in all and there is satisfaction in them getting their just rewards.

Good Story

5* for not making me puke with another cuckold forgiveness story. However, there are some issues that others have brought up and I agree with:
1. Stupid wife? How about developmentally disabled in order to go along with a scheme like that? That, or crazy, or mean sick bitch. Anyway it was over the top.
2. He was a marine and a ruthless killer but he is a pushover at work? Not rational, he doesn't have to kill anyone he just has to get the work done and stay on schedule. Aggression on the construction site is often met with aggression. This means sabotage and payback for dickhead project managers. So, cooperation and staying on schedule is the hallmark of a good manager. It is all about time and money.
3. He just recorded his own criminal acts of: kidnapping, assault, and rape. He has as much if not more than they have to lose. - Irrational.

Another husband with a secret military background

If the cunt was really that stupid, Greg wouldn't have married her in the first place, but we have to assume he was as stupid as her when he did. However, this calls into question his post-killer reformation; was he ever disciplined?

Then we come to the farce that is "company policy" and Greg's assumption he can get away with his revenge: neither is plausible.

ok at best

while this sounds like a good story. its not. come on this was about as realistic as a fucking fairy tale.

Grew up in Chicago IL as well inner city

Great story, anybody who did not live in the midst of the Black Panthers and Latin Kings and criticizes this story is an asshole. Great Job

Have read the comments...

...so won't read the story. Tough, eh?

Stupid

Dumb ass premise for a story! 1*

Re. Sugna

So, you thought it was a stupid fucking story, full of holes, yet you still gave it five stars. 'Nuff said.

Liked that he didnt pick the cucky way

and got his revenge. A little unlikely, coulda been real good if some more details had been offered.