It has been an excellent series. Good story lines and some of the very best graphic descriptions of good sex.
The consolatdion is that with this talented writer one series ends and another begins.
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Anonymous04/19/16
Not sorry to see it end
After Page 1, maybe. But Page 2 included something like "witch you can see it between..." Learn to write English before you try a full story, let alone a series!
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Anonymous08/01/16
Wrong Name
Got your characters confused on who was in the car. You said Lillian, even though it was Nikita. Just need to proof read what you've written.
English
Sorry to see this end
It has been an excellent series. Good story lines and some of the very best graphic descriptions of good sex.
The consolatdion is that with this talented writer one series ends and another begins.
Not sorry to see it end
After Page 1, maybe. But Page 2 included something like "witch you can see it between..." Learn to write English before you try a full story, let alone a series!
Wrong Name
Got your characters confused on who was in the car. You said Lillian, even though it was Nikita. Just need to proof read what you've written.
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