I love the story you wrote. I am looking forward for the next chapter.
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Anonymous11/24/14
I hope there is more to come.
It feels too incomplete to even rate. Still waiting for incest to occur??? Could be a good story depending on what follows, however, the vote is still out from me.
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Anonymous11/24/14
Great start
Show a lot of respect and true feelings. Can be a big help to each other without going all the way
Not exactly a sex story, except for Jason's beating off to Cori's infatuating image. On the other hand, it's a nice love story from Cori's POV. Does it lead to more? If so, I hope Ch. 2 is better developed to show how it happens. How did Cori develop such an attraction to her brother? How did she see the possible lover hiding behind his acne driven shyness? There is where the real story lies, and I hope it will be brought out in a sequel, along with Jason's growth into masculinity. He seems hardly worth his sister's efforts at this point.
What a refreshing change from wam bam thank you mam stories. This story actually had depth and a honest emotion. I am looking forward to further chapters.
WTF Is it with all making the story's so short,were in twitter world now have to know what's happening ASAP or before
Anyway next chapter please and ASAP Thanks
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Anonymous11/26/14
Loved it!
At last! A story with some love between the siblings, and not just curiosity or animal lust. I'm sure you'll continue it; you've laid a solid foundation for a great story! It was surprising when the boy just poured it all out in the car (but it made sense). I'm eager to find out why Corinne loved her younger brother so strongly and so long.
if you don't have a pt2 coming soon then I will find you and beat you with wet noodles until you scream for chocolate ice cream to be dripped into your left shoe.
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Anonymous11/27/14
Heartfelt
That was really touching, whether or not the siblings go further.
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Anonymous11/29/14
beauty but
It is beautiful and kinda romantic but lack sexual or is it finish?
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Anonymous01/26/15
Love is the name of the game
How refreshing to find a story with some genuine love between siblings, and not just wham-bam-thank-you-ma'am. Not unthinking lust, and not just the main chance. Very tender and believable. Yes, like several others I hope you'll give us more chapters and show us how Corinne came to love her unlovely brother so much. But it's a beautiful story "as is."
Absolutely fantastic. This is a true love story, one for the ages. I can not believe how good this story is and there is no sex scene. Only a buildup and explosion of love and emotion between Cori and Jason, unbelievable erotic and heartfelt. Please continue this story. As others have said maybe a back story of Cori's love for Jason, then onto the ultimate chapter(s), together forever happily ever after.
There are plenty of us who are romantics at heart and want the love story above all else, that includes the sex. I know others may make fun or rate low because there is no sex but this story doesn't need it to be erotic. Again you have crafted a beautiful and epic love story that I hope you continue. 5 stars is not enough!!
English
and then what?
sweet
Ah sweet vanilla, my love
Exactly
And then what?
Great Story
I love the story you wrote. I am looking forward for the next chapter.
I hope there is more to come.
It feels too incomplete to even rate. Still waiting for incest to occur??? Could be a good story depending on what follows, however, the vote is still out from me.
Great start
Show a lot of respect and true feelings. Can be a big help to each other without going all the way
Please Develop
Not exactly a sex story, except for Jason's beating off to Cori's infatuating image. On the other hand, it's a nice love story from Cori's POV. Does it lead to more? If so, I hope Ch. 2 is better developed to show how it happens. How did Cori develop such an attraction to her brother? How did she see the possible lover hiding behind his acne driven shyness? There is where the real story lies, and I hope it will be brought out in a sequel, along with Jason's growth into masculinity. He seems hardly worth his sister's efforts at this point.
Next Chapter
Waiting for next chapter. Thanks
More! More!
Can hardly wait for part 2!
P2
Part 2 is needed
Damn Well Done.
What a refreshing change from wam bam thank you mam stories. This story actually had depth and a honest emotion. I am looking forward to further chapters.
WTF great start but ended to quick/short
WTF Is it with all making the story's so short,were in twitter world now have to know what's happening ASAP or before
Anyway next chapter please and ASAP Thanks
Loved it!
At last! A story with some love between the siblings, and not just curiosity or animal lust. I'm sure you'll continue it; you've laid a solid foundation for a great story! It was surprising when the boy just poured it all out in the car (but it made sense). I'm eager to find out why Corinne loved her younger brother so strongly and so long.
if you don't have a pt2 coming soon then I will find you and beat you with wet noodles until you scream for chocolate ice cream to be dripped into your left shoe.
Heartfelt
That was really touching, whether or not the siblings go further.
beauty but
It is beautiful and kinda romantic but lack sexual or is it finish?
Love is the name of the game
How refreshing to find a story with some genuine love between siblings, and not just wham-bam-thank-you-ma'am. Not unthinking lust, and not just the main chance. Very tender and believable. Yes, like several others I hope you'll give us more chapters and show us how Corinne came to love her unlovely brother so much. But it's a beautiful story "as is."
Stunning Love
Absolutely fantastic. This is a true love story, one for the ages. I can not believe how good this story is and there is no sex scene. Only a buildup and explosion of love and emotion between Cori and Jason, unbelievable erotic and heartfelt. Please continue this story. As others have said maybe a back story of Cori's love for Jason, then onto the ultimate chapter(s), together forever happily ever after.
There are plenty of us who are romantics at heart and want the love story above all else, that includes the sex. I know others may make fun or rate low because there is no sex but this story doesn't need it to be erotic. Again you have crafted a beautiful and epic love story that I hope you continue. 5 stars is not enough!!
Great story is there a pt2
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