I like the first two chapters so far. It would be nice to see the mom get more involved in this also, if you intend to do another chapter. And maybe a little bit of action between the sisters like you hinted at earlier in the story. Overall pretty good.
Glad to see another chapter out so soon. Keep the momentum up! Lets see how long it is until Chelsea makes her fertile fantasies into a reality. After all, a girl has to take the pill every day in order for it to be effective, and there's a whole weekend left to go...
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Anonymous11/27/14
MLK would be so proud
I have a dream that in the next chapter the 2 converts head off to ferguson to protest at the way black males are portrayed in the media
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Anonymous11/30/14
babies please
The sisters need to both get pregnant with twins or triplets each. Then they need to give birth to a new baby every 10 months after that until they both hit menopause.
I loved this story line. The fact that Jennifer is trying to get pregnant by her black lover is fantastic as I personally believe all white girls/women should have at least one black baby preferrably two. Although Chelsea is faking that she is fertile the time to get pregnant should wait until she gets her degree and finds a job. Once Chelsea accomplishes this then it would be time to stop taking the pills and start taking all the black baby batter she can get so she too can have her own baby bump.
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Good Followup
I like the first two chapters so far. It would be nice to see the mom get more involved in this also, if you intend to do another chapter. And maybe a little bit of action between the sisters like you hinted at earlier in the story. Overall pretty good.
Dropping hints
Story not bad so far. Now you hinted that sisters found their naked contact felt good. You really need to follow up on that.
Sweet!
Glad to see another chapter out so soon. Keep the momentum up! Lets see how long it is until Chelsea makes her fertile fantasies into a reality. After all, a girl has to take the pill every day in order for it to be effective, and there's a whole weekend left to go...
MLK would be so proud
I have a dream that in the next chapter the 2 converts head off to ferguson to protest at the way black males are portrayed in the media
babies please
The sisters need to both get pregnant with twins or triplets each. Then they need to give birth to a new baby every 10 months after that until they both hit menopause.
Time to get pregnant
I loved this story line. The fact that Jennifer is trying to get pregnant by her black lover is fantastic as I personally believe all white girls/women should have at least one black baby preferrably two. Although Chelsea is faking that she is fertile the time to get pregnant should wait until she gets her degree and finds a job. Once Chelsea accomplishes this then it would be time to stop taking the pills and start taking all the black baby batter she can get so she too can have her own baby bump.
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