Well written, no enormous sizes promoting believability, and so open ended. Might be the perfect set up for a narration change. Say over to Natalie's. Just a suggestion as it seems you've got a good handle on what's your story. Please, continue and thanks.
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very good start.
Looking forward to more.
So far so good
liking the story so far hope you make the next chapter longer
Good start
Many have been in this situation, it takes time to adjust. Some do make the best of the situation and really enjoy it.
Good story
This calls for more chapters. Thanks
Can hardly wait for more!
This is hot and sexy!
I"m liking it so far.
Well written, no enormous sizes promoting believability, and so open ended. Might be the perfect set up for a narration change. Say over to Natalie's. Just a suggestion as it seems you've got a good handle on what's your story. Please, continue and thanks.
Next chapter please!
Very hot, looking forward to the next chapter!
very good
Very good start to a great series can't wait for the next chapter.
Damn....
I really loved this peice. I hope its continued.
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