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by Anonymous

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by 63lsmith11/25/14

NICE STORY

Nice story,however the type o's were a bit distracting. Still a 4 star read.

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by Anonymous12/21/14

Oh dear...

The typos are too much. Not to mention there isn't a single highway near Swansea, lived there most of my life and don't know a single one. Motorways, maybe, no highways.

"Grasping my whatsits" why be cryptically vague when in the next paragraph you're going to use a name like horny Joe?

Take a breath and work through your ideas slowly to get the details right. That way you might avoid the typos too.

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by alexcarr12/25/14

It is only fiction!

It is not true. Merely fiction okay?

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