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by Anonymous

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by Anonymous11/27/14

Wow. One of the worst that ever made it onto Literotica

I realise that in this modern age of laziness and apathy, most people cannot be bothered to learn how to use language properly. Even with that in mind, you must at least learn what a full stop is for.

You cannot write. Please learn a little before you try again.

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by Anonymous11/27/14

Wow

Neither of your characters have any likeable qualities. So, your readers do not care for, or are interested in, either of them. Besides, your are not e.e. cummings and should not ignore the need for quotation marks, etc.

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by Anonymous01/11/15

Absolute crap

Not worth commenting on. One page of total shite. .

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by Anonymous01/11/15

excellent sex in this story

Gave it a 5 , Hi dear annony!!!

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