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by kaleido210/03/05

a litle strange, but i like it

The story is told very well and i guess i got a bit of what you wanted to express, but i am not sure.
Maybe you would like to explain in a second chapter ?

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by Callidora02/24/07

I hope you are still writing

This story confused the heck out of me, but never mind that--you are too good at this to stop. At least I think so. I hope you are still writing.

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by raphy05/12/07

Oh yeah....

I never usually vote - Selfish that way, I guess. But I love original and thought-provoking stories.. Although it's not usually what one visits lit for, eh ;) This is both. And no, I didn't find it hard to understand. But I did find it hard to not re-read....

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