by MarciaR
The story is told very well and i guess i got a bit of what you wanted to express, but i am not sure.
Maybe you would like to explain in a second chapter ?
This story confused the heck out of me, but never mind that--you are too good at this to stop. At least I think so. I hope you are still writing.
I never usually vote - Selfish that way, I guess. But I love original and thought-provoking stories.. Although it's not usually what one visits lit for, eh ;) This is both. And no, I didn't find it hard to understand. But I did find it hard to not re-read....