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I Dream of Demie Ch. 03

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by Anonymous

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by Whackdoodle12/01/14

Again, this was already posted only a couple of weeks ago.

A good story but it only gets a 1 star on the second to around.

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by Deep Soaker12/01/14

Original ideas

I do not understand the comments by Whackdoodle at the end of chapters 2 and 3. This story series seems very original and well written and deserves much better than a 1. Under what user name and title was it published a few weeks ago? Is it possible that it was published by Krosis on a different web site?

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