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by Anonymous11/26/14

wrong

Used a localize ism not the term known to the world. The mistake is "suspender belt" which more widely known is 'garter belt' such little errors reduce the number who will read any future stories by the author.

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by Anonymous12/01/14

Re: wrong

If you count global as the US then I guess your comment is valid.

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