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by Anonymous11/29/14

I think maybe some of it should have been internal monologue...?

This was really good, but the fact that she was so forth coming kept making me laugh. I kept picturing her talking to the detective while saying things like... "I could feel the warm blush of pleasure building between my legs and gradually spread through me in widening waves." ... and the detective looking at her as if she were insane afterwards before responding with... Lifts a brow. "I see." ... Then calling a mental institution to have her committed.

So, it was pretty enjoyable... but like I said... that part kept making me laugh.

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by MeredithEighty811/29/14

Inner Thoughts

Re-read story and you are so right. Will try and be more careful in the future. Thank you for your thoughtful feedback.

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