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GOOD START
Yep, I'm one of those who believe in psychics and such. Had my future (accurately) told a couple of times.
I thoroughly enjoy a good "mind control" or "telepathic" story, and yours has all the making of being a great one. Loved the cliffhanger ending :):).
Thanks for sharing, and looking forward to your next chapter
Bob.
Good start.
Really needs to be longer, but it's interesting for sure and decently written.
Good start!
Yes, I think you should continue this story. There is a lot of potential here. A lot of ways you can take the story line.
Liking it
Cool concept! Looking forward to future installments.
Great setting
Very good start. You've got an audience if the inspiration continues. Please, tell us more.
Pace, setting, plot, all very nice. Great ending (though sort of a cliff if you Don't continue, so please do!)
More please!
Good start, and some decent character development. Please continue.
Excellent!
Keep it going!
Sad
How hard would it be to just walk away from the crazy woman?
Honestly, this story shouldn't have more than one more chapter. Either she's got nothing to threaten him with (except being a stalker which is criminal and he can get a restraining order); or she does, in which case he mans up, gets her in a dark alley and slits her throat.
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