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Becky's Lips

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by Anonymous11/29/14

Like your style

All you have done is given a taster, I believe you have more of this story in you.
GIVE IT TO ME. (I mean more of the story)

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by Anonymous11/29/14

short and sweet like always

I'm sure you will keep us informed of further adventures keep on trucking ten bears 43

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by BurntRedstone12/01/14

Delicious story

I very much enjoyed this short tale of sapphic discovery.

Thanks!

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by Anonymous12/02/14

a life changer

Great story only thing is that I thought that it was to short. I think that there is a good opportunity for more of the story. I am looking forward to reading the continuing story of these two women. There is so much more that you can tell us about what happened after Becky comes back to college. Thanks for starting a good story. As always. B C

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by Anonymous12/04/14

so good!

Loved it!

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by Anonymous01/13/15

Wondermental

I only use this word I invented as a kid when something is very special.....your story is very real as well as being arousing....the one request I have is that you please continue the story....perhaps to the point of a true relationship or the bringing in of other people ...... there are many branches on a tree.....you have a very interesting and sturdy trunk to build upon....please.....let there be more....you are an excellent writer.

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by Lcnmd03/23/15

Love it

Thank you for writing this amazing story!

Soooooo good!

L

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by Anonymous06/26/15

Loved it.

I loved your writing. Thanks for sharing.

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by Anonymous11/16/15

Great Story

Loved your story but only wished it had continued with Linda and Becky getting together for the New Year. Lots could be written about their affair and maybe even having Becky control Linda over time. Could happen.

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by Anonymous08/06/16

Very nice story

I really enjoyed this story, and would love to read more of it (hint, hint ;) )

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by Anonymous12/20/16

Unexpectedly good

When I saw the story I didn't have any idea that it would be like it was
I assumed that Linda would be the aggressive one and Becky would be like a innocent little virgin who gets seduced by her professor.
It threw me for a loop when I found out that it was quite the opposite.
Most stories of teachers and students are about the teacher seducing the student
I read the whole story and thought that it was good.
I hope that you might consider writing another chapter about them in the next semester

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