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Silent Love Ch. 02

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by Anonymous

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by NC2237111/28/14

Very hot

Ummm

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by Anonymous12/03/14

Awesome

Harvey you are without a doubt quickly becoming my favorite author on this or any site. Keep up the work.

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by Anonymous01/03/15

1 + 1 = 1

The two separate chapters (so far?) add up to one interesting story. Some of your sentence construction, particularly in Chapter One, seemed a bit stiff and clumsy but not so much as to ruin the story. I'd consider going on a retreat myself but with my luck I'd end up in a Trappist monastery.

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