Accidental Gangbang

Clever

I like the creativity of this premise, and you did a good job fleshing it out in a way that kept the narrative fun and erotic.

Agree with Swingerjoe

Not usually a gang bang fan, but your twist on it made it very hot. Loved it!!

CUCKOLD TO-BE

Start doing CLEANUP now and become a good CUCKOLD you kissed her and got all that cum now eat that pussy and have her sit on our face to cleanup that ass. YUM YUM

Very good

How about a chapter 2? Maybe Dad and Father in law knowing and joining again?

Well

you missplaced the comma in that last sentence. It should come after your ass, but it still rates a four ****!

Wow

All I can say: So Wrong, It's Right.

Great job! one of your best!

Twisted and so wrong -- perfect! I always enjoy your stories, but this one is a new high.

Shockingly Extraordinary

I have been looking for a story like this for how many years. It has all my favorite things combined while also being not too long and not too short. Thank you so much!!!

Finally

A good story devoid of the usual crappy themes. Good job, you deserve a pat on the head and a treat.

Very nice.

I like your work. When I saw this title I had to come read it.

Very good, very neat story lie. Thanks for a fun read.

Nice story

Except for that last sentence hot as always

Good job

Loved it from start to finish, some good twists.

Bravo

Really enjoyed your story. Concise and well written. You may want to consider a part 2. The wedding night

Pretty sure this is innappropriate

So i can't help but notice that the majority of this story is pretty much lifted verbatim from Gift Box by Hypoxia (http://www.literotica.com/s/gift-box) which I know you've read because its in your favourites. Pretty sure this is unacceptable behaviour to directly copy someones else story like this?

AWESOME

Confused

The ending confused me. I thought Joey was the last in her ass.

Also, "quipped" was overused.

Authors comment

As mentioned in the opening...this story is not a rip off of Gift Box, both Gift Box and this story were inspired by my Christmas ideas thread and a person who suggested this plot. Both hypoxia and myself liked the suggestion and wrote our own spin on it.

See the thread for proof:
http://forum.literotica.com/showthread.php?t=1 094747

Very hot!

a big ol' 5 stars!

silky is quite right

Both my GIFT BOX and silky's ***** tale here were directly inspired by ender's forum suggestion. We took different approaches; I like this one too.

Another fucking hot cum inducing fuck tale from the great Silk Stockings Lover

Holy fuck!!!!!!! Woman - you know everything fuck related and I stand in awe!!!!!!! Your ability to describe these occurrences almost requires you to have experienced them and if so - more power to you and "Keep on Fuckin'" and tellin' us about it!!!! I enjoy your stories more than any on the site and have to admit my cock is hard almost always from beginning to end (or until I help it out with a little judicious pumping).

Your stories are at least as awe (and erection and ejaculation) inspiring as a SUPERB fuck video by my favorite, Jessica Drake!

Nice

Another great story. Thanks

Excellent

As Always, fabulous work. Thank you.

Wow!

That was an intense story for me. I'm not sure if could have handled being Clarissa, but I'd have loved to have tried!

Story Comparison

Read this entry and "Gift Box" by Hypoxia. While I enjoyed the "Gift Box" this version of the story is a more fleshed out one. It gets my vote.

Nice read

Wasn't sure what to expect when I started, but you wrote this very well. Definitely turned me on. Have you ever been part of a gangbang yourself?

very touching

A gripping read. Thanks.

Excellent!

Very good stuff! Thanks!

Loved it

Very nicely done, but how did the best friend slide out without being seen by anyone? Or maybe she knew what was going to happen and sat outside and laughed. Either way, it was worth the read.

Great Story

Just loved it.

best ever

Keep it coming love ur stories

Oh, holy shit, this was s-o-o-o-o-o-o fucking HOT!!!!

Wife fucking other men

You can't ware it out !!!!

Speechless

Can I be her for one night?

Mmmmm

OMG.......Just goes to show every woman has an inner slut begging to come out......Enjoy her when she makes an appearance.

another really hot story! loved it

Great story

Very hot set up, very nice follow through. Would love to see you revisit this young bride, and see what other accidental or intentional adventures she could have.

He may have liked watching his girlfriend

But there's no way he'd marry the slut. Good to find out her true nature before he married her. Saves a lot of money in the long run. The very last sentence told him all he needed to know about her character. Anyone willing to suck on a cock straight out of an ass was nobody anybody would want as a wife. And since someone is always filming at a bachelor party, her slutty actions would be available for everyone to see. That way there can be no questions among family and friends who was responsible for the wedding being called off. A truly disgusting story.

Good story

Nice story that hits on several hot spots. Love the fiancé being a fuck slut and enjoying the treatment. The family using her and her cumming for them should be explored. The father and father in law can dominate her in front of her husband and train her as a family whore.

I love how zestfully you wear your fetishes on your sleeve

In two pages, you manage to include group sex, anal sex, incest and a form of non-consent. What's particularly fascinating about the non-consent aspect is that Clarissa is never bound in any way other than by a self-imposed adherence to an abstract social contract; the expectations of others. The forbidden element of her actions ramped up the intensity not only for Clarissa, but for the reader as well.

I also enjoyed the husband's forgiving acceptance of what was clearly a surprise gone horribly wrong or wonderfully right, depending on how you look at it.

Amazing!

I loved everything about this story. Well done indeed.

beulahandallenthebrit

AMAZING, just the way I would like to spend an evening, never been that lucky, he's got a wife who not only loves cock, but has no boundaries. This begs out for a sequal, as usual Silk-stocking lover has hit the target.

haters gonna hate

U continue to amaze the readers by your gift......

Funny Comment!

Great story, and what was so funny to me was the anonymous (of course) comment by the person who was "disgusted" by the story and yet, by their own admission, read it all the way to the last sentence LOL! So "disgusting" they couldn't quit reading :D.
Well written. kudos!

Why your one of my favourite authors.

Suspenseful, humorous, lustful & erotic, what more can you jam into two pages? Not very much at all! Don't get enough time to read but when I do, I try to seek you out. No doubt I will continue to enjoy your work.

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Anon did you check with Silk before putting an ad in his comments?

10/10

Couldn't be better

to anonymous

Relax. She got fucked by all the right people

hot

This story is so hot minus the incest obviously

!!!

A solid 4 Budweiser Scale !!!

Hot stuff

This was a hot and sexy story I loved it it needs a sequel l am just hard for a sequel