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Here it is!
Y'all want a part 5?
*getting it all over HER toes haha
part 5 PLEASE
I absolutely loved the foot worship scene in this part and the build up that led to the climax at the end.
Please do a part 5 :) the ending to this wasn't enough!
Absolutely no one cares.
Less than 1500 people read this mess. All you have to do is look at the score to know that nobody wants anymore of this drivel. UGH!
Hey, I'm sorry to hear that you didn't like it. Are you able to maturely tell me what I'm able to improve on? Or is your negative opinion not of the writing style, but of the fetish?
Also, you wouldn't happen to be one of those angry people from my post in the bulletin board, would you?
Same shit.
I honestly think that these stories are getting kind of boring. For 3 episodes he does nothing, and finally gets 1 footjob in this one. Can't you add some tension to the plot or something? At this point it's the same shit.
Hey I honestly love this series. Part 5 would be fantastic; don't let these guys get you down. One suggestion that I'd love to see incorporated would be more teasing and denial. I think that might've been what the last guy meant by "tension", because I felt the end was slightly anticlimactic but what do I know. Anyway thanks for writing and I hope you'll keep up the great work.
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