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Thug Lovin'

byGreat_Pharaoh©
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by Anonymous

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by larry7440311/28/14

Well that was awful.

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by mcbtws11/28/14

WTF

Translation please.

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by Anonymous11/28/14

Ebonics at it's best...

you're trying to hard to be ghetto...rewrite it in English please...

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by Anonymous11/28/14

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I want to like this, but please translate it. I like the premise, but I want to like this more.
Thank you.

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by geemeedee11/28/14

Didn't bother me.

I enjoyed the story! The language sounded real to me. If I didn't know the slang, the inference was enough for me to figure it out. Stories start to read the same on this site, and I found this refreshing, I like the humor -- "I bent over to get a nothing that was on the floor" made me giggle -- and my only complaint is that it wasn't longer. Keep writing!

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by 63lsmith11/29/14

NOT GOOD

2 Stars at best, I think it could have been more if we could understand more of it.

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by Anonymous11/30/14

Hmm

Lots of missspelling...and I don't mean "wit". Your use of slang...attempted use of slang, didn't make your story more authentic. It made you seem like a moron. I was more offended than aroused. Try again.

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by Anonymous02/05/15

good lovin

Its OK but could be better

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by Alwaysme1702/09/15

I want MORE!

Keep writing and don't stop just got gold on your hands.

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