The genreally and nearly worldwide accepted slang for an orgasm is 'CUM OR CUMMING' NOT repeat NOT 'come' damn why do authors keep making this simple mistake.
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Anonymous02/06/15
Don't criticize great authorship!
SweetPrettyAss, don't be concerned over "come" or "cum"!!!! I agree with the person who provided that criticism but your fantastic fuck stories rise so far above the mediocre offerings of most authors that my cumming or coming, whichever, is the only thing on my mind whenever I read one of your "cumcausing" or "comecausing" (whichever you prefer - the effect is the same) stories.
Your material is one hell of a lot hotter and better thought out and written that 95% of the stuff on this website. To be so graphic you almost HAVE to have experienced a great deal of these "funtime fucktimes" and I appreciate the way you put them together far more than to criticize how you choose to describe ejaculation! (Maybe your critic would go for that one!) Keep up the GREAT writing, baby!!!!!!
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totally wrong slang
The genreally and nearly worldwide accepted slang for an orgasm is 'CUM OR CUMMING' NOT repeat NOT 'come' damn why do authors keep making this simple mistake.
Don't criticize great authorship!
SweetPrettyAss, don't be concerned over "come" or "cum"!!!! I agree with the person who provided that criticism but your fantastic fuck stories rise so far above the mediocre offerings of most authors that my cumming or coming, whichever, is the only thing on my mind whenever I read one of your "cumcausing" or "comecausing" (whichever you prefer - the effect is the same) stories.
Your material is one hell of a lot hotter and better thought out and written that 95% of the stuff on this website. To be so graphic you almost HAVE to have experienced a great deal of these "funtime fucktimes" and I appreciate the way you put them together far more than to criticize how you choose to describe ejaculation! (Maybe your critic would go for that one!) Keep up the GREAT writing, baby!!!!!!
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