While you may not find this story erotic - though I for one most certainly did - I don't think it's a fair criticism to say the story is poorly written. With the exception of a typo or two, the writing is very good, a higher quality than most sites on Lit.
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Anonymous01/25/15
I second the disagreement with the first anonymous review.
There are many things that are poorly written in this world, but THIS is NOT one of them. You may not agree with or like the subject matter, and most certainly that is your prerogative, and you may even say so (but honestly, you got this far into the story and now don't like it?) but your complaint about it being poorly written is utter nonsense.
The author should completely ignore such statements as yours as mindless hate-speech.
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I disagree with the anonymous reviewer
While you may not find this story erotic - though I for one most certainly did - I don't think it's a fair criticism to say the story is poorly written. With the exception of a typo or two, the writing is very good, a higher quality than most sites on Lit.
I second the disagreement with the first anonymous review.
There are many things that are poorly written in this world, but THIS is NOT one of them. You may not agree with or like the subject matter, and most certainly that is your prerogative, and you may even say so (but honestly, you got this far into the story and now don't like it?) but your complaint about it being poorly written is utter nonsense.
The author should completely ignore such statements as yours as mindless hate-speech.
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