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Sister-In-Law Joins the Hike

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by Mello_SixtyNine11/29/14

Where's the incest? Is that in part 2?

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by Anonymous11/30/14

Nice story, but needs some proofreading

Kudos for writing a story that is interesting...I bet that Elizabeth and Dave were "making pictures" of their own.

How about a foursome for Part 2?

Thanks!

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by Anonymous11/30/14

Ending

I enjoyed the build-up but, the description of the act was a little brief. I don't think you knew how you wanted to finish the story. The finish was way too short and cut things off.

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