All Comments on 'Yours For Two Hours Ch. 02'

This hits on all my nastiest, dirtiest fantasies!

Fanfreakingtastic!

blows a kiss your way

Perhaps it has to do with the second person POV. For my part though, I really loved it. Great fantasy for that Hyde side of my personality. :) Thanks!

ohmygod! lovely story. brought all of my dirty little fantasies to life. i would love to be her.

Sounds just like how my husband and I like it.

Great story.

Its *fabulous*! You gotta write more!!

PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE continue - have the cops ass-rape her, something, anything - so HOT!

i enjoyed reading this story and would like it to go further

I absolutely loved this!!! It is fun, sex, and fantasy all rolled into one tighty woven tapestry of erotic literature. Excellent!!!

great if my boyfriend would do this nasty fuckshit to me. fuckin loved it. keep it up

that was good. nice work

Love both chapters.

Gets me wet every time.

..Wish I were her.

keep writing more

Perfect job..never read a better humiliation story. However, her real boyfriend should have come in after two hours and seen the sublime rape and should have got in some action too.

uhg so good!!!! really got me off. damn i want to be her!

A most wonderful story. Maybe written a bit much from the male perspective, but I'll know that better after my partner has read it all. Thank you Steve

I love it when a slut loves what's coming to her!

so jealous of the slut. i wanna be fucked and humiliated just like that damn it!

That was really hot, i totally get off on the idea of being humiliated so reading this was an orgasm waiting to happen. now wheres my rabbit.....

cindi

xx

p.s. your a really great writer

love ya

baii

Thank you so much for posting this...It's amazing. I'm so jealous of the girl; I wanna be used like that...Please write more. Soon!!

I had to stop part way through and get off.

mmmmmm, and ass fucking doesn't even turn me on, but this sure as hell does!

kisses!

Fantastic, not into anal, but still got me off...

...but you have a hell of a way with words. Insanely hot; absolutely fantastic. I've come 3 times to your entries just tonight; keep writing! ;)

Fucking amazing loved first one too much anal be good to add somthing else

Part 2 was not nearly as interesting as part one, all about anal, and if thats not of any special interest, it gets a bit boring. Lots of things he could have done to her apart from anal. I would suggest he has a room to take her to full of sex toys and whips.

Too much anal.

it was a good read but you seemed to dow play a lot of what mad the firs storie enthraling

This was an amazing read! Being a submissive little pain slut myself, i can completely appreciate this story! So... what happens next?

Just the way submissive sluts love to be used. Humiliated and battered. Mmmmmmm

I came so fucking hard. Good work! PLEASE write more!

Love it! More! More! More! Just like a good fucktoy should beg for...

excellent you really should write more I and I am sure many others would love to know what happens next in the story

I'm a fan of multiple orgasms too :)

No.

I hate the ending! I wanted it to go on and on! He really knew how to use her. Lucky girl.