Your English comprehension is pretty bad. Improve on that and you could possibly write good stories!
This story is total rubbish
Quite badly written.
I would want another date with that kind of girl. She's good for seconds in my opinion
I would definitely want to see her again, Tight pussy is in very short supply so when you find one, hold onto it.
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Your English comprehension is pretty bad. Improve on that and you could possibly write good stories!
My english is good
This story is total rubbish
Did you finish school with grades?
Quite badly written.
Goody
I would want another date with that kind of girl. She's good for seconds in my opinion
My opinion
I would definitely want to see her again, Tight pussy is in very short supply so when you find one, hold onto it.
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