Try telling stories with the before plot continued. Too much jumping in past and stuff. But nevertheless a good one. 2.5 stars (3)
I particularly like it when he includes women into the picture. He is a great asset to the Literotica site.
of convoluted crap this story was
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Too much Jumping
Try telling stories with the before plot continued. Too much jumping in past and stuff.
But nevertheless a good one. 2.5 stars (3)
SR71plt is always good for a story
I particularly like it when he includes women into the picture. He is a great asset to the Literotica site.
What a load
of convoluted crap this story was
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