Cleaning Out Kelly

So So

We both believe this was short and nasty. Why did the mother submit to her daughter so willingly. Anything that has to do with excrement or fecal matter is nasty to both parties. We would like to see the mother take control of her daughter and excrete the remains of an enema down the daughter's throat. Turn about is fair play.

Laura & Lisa, bi sisters, NASTY STORY

*shrug*

Not very good, maybe it's just not my thing

are you kidding?

How old are you anyway? It seems like some young teenager who has NO knowledge of sex or just about anything sexual wrote this so called story. You can't just make a bunch of stuff up and put it in paragraph form and call it a story. Please please, I beg you........stop writing this crud. It's not impressive, it's not seductive but what it is is plain gross!!!

An Embarressment

The writing and the story are infantile.

Your other writing was MUCH better

Clausimotto,
What did you do??? re-write this, still ifentile writing but its not worth readin now.!

the others should try it first!

Previous comments show a lot of ignorance. There is nothing better than being a toilet for a beautiful woman.

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Pretty fuckin nasty. I thought it was going good in the beginning, but when she started pissing on her mom, then shitting on her. That was too much.

Ok,the title pretty much tells the story. Scat and/or bathroom fetish don't strike me as erotic subjects. Fortunately, the story is a little too juvenile to be really disgusting.