Excellently atmospheric - vividly erotic - commandingly readable.
Nice one!
If there be any vaguely adverse comments they would be that I'd have asked for more detail to the sex acts and maybe a bit more conversation.
But good nevertheless - well done.
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Anonymous12/07/14
Casey 1988
This is one of the saddest stories I have read recently. Another great work from you. the story flowed well and I could visualize being there watching. Anyway I am a male bisexual who is a fan of most of your gay works.
English
Good one!
Excellently atmospheric - vividly erotic - commandingly readable.
Nice one!
If there be any vaguely adverse comments they would be that I'd have asked for more detail to the sex acts and maybe a bit more conversation.
But good nevertheless - well done.
Casey 1988
This is one of the saddest stories I have read recently. Another great work from you. the story flowed well and I could visualize being there watching. Anyway I am a male bisexual who is a fan of most of your gay works.
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