there was passion and confusion as real life goes and it made me reflect back on my complex life.... great job of sucking me into your world... definitely keep writing
Well a bit bizzar, what with the exhibitionist kink, but interesting, and I look forward to your finish of the story. Shame you had to burn the girlfriend, but it doesn't sound like she is a good match sexually for him.
This has all the conflicted desires that make real life so complex and difficult.
I enjoyed the tension about finding something new that couldn't be let go of, yet afraid to tell significant but judgemental people, for fear they wouldn't (and didn't) understand.
This is something which I experienced a short while before my divorce.
English
twists, turns, and more...
there was passion and confusion as real life goes and it made me reflect back on my complex life.... great job of sucking me into your world... definitely keep writing
My hope
Will there be more? I sure hope so! Good start.
Pretty good!
Well a bit bizzar, what with the exhibitionist kink, but interesting, and I look forward to your finish of the story. Shame you had to burn the girlfriend, but it doesn't sound like she is a good match sexually for him.
chilley
to be continued...( I hope! )
Orie,..have read all 3,..could not put down. I love your writing, and hope it continues with 'room with a view 4,..5...etc! Ferry come back!!!
Quite the roller coaster ride
As one who has no problems with E & V I'm somewhat confused but I'm enjoying the storyline.
Realistic and intriguing
This has all the conflicted desires that make real life so complex and difficult.
I enjoyed the tension about finding something new that couldn't be let go of, yet afraid to tell significant but judgemental people, for fear they wouldn't (and didn't) understand.
This is something which I experienced a short while before my divorce.
Keep up the great work, your mind is fascinating.
Not just a perv...
But an idiot perv...!
Well done
Very well done, great story. Thanks for your efforts.
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