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Taylor Swift - White Christmas

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by Anonymous

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by Anonymous12/03/14

constructive criticism

Good but you're rushing. Slow down a bit and write a full chapter instead of throwing something out to submit just for the sake of doing so.

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by BadgerHunter12/03/14

sorry

I apologise, I really do, I believe moving forward my stories need to be definitely longer with less "skipping" between areas. I will try avoid the rushed attitude that in hindsight is quite evident, I can only say sorry.

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by Anonymous01/06/15

Taylor Swift has never said "Merry Bloody Christmas" in her life. Right there you lost readers. This is garbage.

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