I loved your story, especially from Tess's point of view as she watches what is happening beneath her. I don't think I would have been able to look away either. Voyeurism is such a fascinating thing. Thank you for your story. Keep up the writing.
I really enjoyed it but felt this needed a bit more backstory to really build the suspence. I also couldn't help but feel bad for Tess, had fingers crossed that she would've been caught. And I do hate you for that cliffhanger ending..... hmf. Ch.2?
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I loved your story, especially from Tess's point of view as she watches what is happening beneath her. I don't think I would have been able to look away either. Voyeurism is such a fascinating thing. Thank you for your story. Keep up the writing.
bit short.
I really enjoyed it but felt this needed a bit more backstory to really build the suspence. I also couldn't help but feel bad for Tess, had fingers crossed that she would've been caught. And I do hate you for that cliffhanger ending..... hmf. Ch.2?
Engaging...
...voyeuristic tale. I liked the fact that there is much for the reader to guess at, speculate about, it sparks the imagination.
Would like to see more of what happens to Tess.
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