A Marriage in Trouble

Thank you...

I enjoyed reading your story. I should get my wife to read it. Thank-you for sharing.

You spelt Jennifer right twice! Shitty editing.

Very good

You have to wonder if they really will make it together as a couple or if it is just for the kids.

Hard to believe

that anything could come of the counseling. She never saw herself as wrong and just as soon as she gets a chance to catch her breath, it will be someone else's fault again. It will be hard to break through that and harder for her husband to stick around and put up with it, even if he is living somewhere else. He still has the kids to worry about.

Good premise, shows thought. Hope it works.

Good twist in the tale

I was sucked into thinking it was the same old story. Nicely pulled round and positive finish. Well done.

ANY PORT IN A STORM

and then keep bailing to survive. TK U MLJ LV NV

Just like real life!

I hope there's going to be more. Five stars!

You telegraphed that one just a bit early...

not the specifics, just that it wasn't what she thought... But it was still enjoyable and different...

dont

I don't see her changing ONE BIT. She has been ragging on his and their kids in years. It is gonna take more than just a chat with her sister to make her see the light.
He rolled over too easy too. He has lots of issues to deal with caused both by wifey and his own acts and reactions.

Interesting Story

As the AA folk, the first step is to recognize you have a problem. It is tough to give up old habits, but some do and others don't. Good luck to them.

stupid

Theres no explanation for whats going on which is kind of necessary when enjoying the blame game. Just that everyones angry, and its all her fault. No examples nothing

Truly A Good Story, But...

There are so many holes...so many unanswered questions...no real foundation...such a lack of details. This doesn't even seem like it was written by the same writer that has given us such wonderful stories. This needs so much work.

I do not understand the criticism

I held my breath while reading this story. Everything not only made sense but was clear.
You wrote this story in a way that allowed me to sense the turmoil, to feel the pain, the trouble the long frightening path ahead
But I would be taking the journey alone
POWERFUL WAY OF BRING TO LIFE ONE'S IMAGINATION
In a story such as this one detailing every nuance would diminish the experience your style induced my mind to feel
Thank you

Needs to continue

I think we need to see these two families a year down the road and the changes that were made. It is situations we have all heard of ir faced.