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Wrong category. What is this non-erotic, mistery bullshit doing in LW?
Painfully drawn out
And it was a very very long intro then ends with him dead or appears to be dead from poison. And he seemed totally clueless about the women he was involved with. The tags are all wrong for this chapter but then it is only the 1st chapter. It seems this is just a nightmare and wonder if everything wakes up or drops some more acid.
Yawn inducing, overly drawn out drivel. Fuck, I think this is the most boring thing I've EVER read on this site.
To Anon
I admit it's not the fastest moving story I've read, but I'll never understand hyperbole like yours. It's very well written, and has interesting characters. The plot isn't obvious and it does end on or at least near one of those escarpments. I'll also never understand why someone finds something to be THE MOST boring yet continues to read.
Jonnyrebel828DE
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