Nice twist on the Halloween premise. The Cop angle was put to good use with both the Goons and the girl. The initial description of her was fabulous. However, I would have hoped for a bit more details once they were hidden. The sex scene was solid and well constructed. The baton was a must, but you could have used it just a bit longer... maybe as a dildo and/or to test if she was an adept of anal sex, especially once it was coated with her abondant juices. Finally, don't hesitate to provide more sensations when describing the character's reactions. The dialogues were quite believable. Overall great work.
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Nice twist
Nice twist on the Halloween premise. The Cop angle was put to good use with both the Goons and the girl. The initial description of her was fabulous. However, I would have hoped for a bit more details once they were hidden. The sex scene was solid and well constructed. The baton was a must, but you could have used it just a bit longer... maybe as a dildo and/or to test if she was an adept of anal sex, especially once it was coated with her abondant juices. Finally, don't hesitate to provide more sensations when describing the character's reactions. The dialogues were quite believable. Overall great work.
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