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CD Fun Ch. 02

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by Anonymous12/04/14

more chapters

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by ffemt5312/05/14

I'm So Happy...

that you are writing this in the way of the married couple still in love with each other and added the CD/Swinger/Gay love into it.
It is so refreshing to she that a married man can dress up a women and still have his wife love him for himself and not want to leave him because of it.
Keep up the adventures of Mikki and Caz. Looking forward to the next installment.
Notes:
Still some spelling errors but not enough to slow it down.

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by Anonymous12/06/14

You switch between first and third person fairly often and it's a bit jarring. If you stuck to one or the other it would flow much more smoothly.

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