It's getting better all the time. Good character development, in a very subtle way...Still the story isn't quiet sure which direction to follow, without being annoying... Next!!
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Almost at full steam now...
It's getting better all the time. Good character development, in a very subtle way...Still the story isn't quiet sure which direction to follow, without being annoying...
Next!!
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