way above normal stuff ..
why bother writing such garbage
Moondrift -ignore the comment below it was not boring - just way too short! You left us hanging just as it got to the very best part!!! You are a great writer - just make your stories longer and take them to completion.
why bother writing such drive,
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good story ..
way above normal stuff ..
very boring
why bother writing such garbage
Too short!!
Moondrift -ignore the comment below it was not boring - just way too short! You left us hanging just as it got to the very best part!!! You are a great writer - just make your stories longer and take them to completion.
total garbage
why bother writing such drive,
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