Very clever!

I thought your poem, and the presentation of it, very clever. Please read my piece, Dear Anonymous.

(((HUGS)))

-Cin

:)

a poem with a pulse.

It is fun and dated and most important of all, it has a beat.

Pedophile

Hide your kids, this guy is a pedophile.

A nice take :)

I love the I-perspective in this - and the picture, of course.

nice try

keep it up

Dracula the wereWolf in a retellin' of

'Red Ridden Wolf ' ?!?! 5-ed .

Excellent

I love this one. Short and hotly sweet

Not entirely sold on this one

even though it has potential. Sweet O.

love the font and nicely illustrated

but the poetry needs work. Sweet O.

Me too, but

Can not agree with your choice of font. Spent a moment wondering why 'deer opens'
5ed anyway

if you must do hallmark

do it X and with class, as poetry, eh? but i'd buy the card
5ed, easy

well

the first rhyming couplets i liked
5ed

Nice, just a hint of dark and scary

I like this story. Seems to foretell far worse for the poor girl.

I like it

The drawing is a bit dark and abstract (woman's torso), but I feel it compliments the poem well. The red dots across the nipple are a nice touch. I also like the emphasis shading.