I am glad you like the shape, I wish the image could have been a bit bigger so it was easier to read but it works.
Nice words and shape which reminds me of... or do I have a dirty mind. :)
Thank you again for favouriting my poem and your lovely comments
I love the shape of the poem and I think it's well-written, sexy and sweet.
Pleased you approve of the final version :-)
Sensually written and is that a shape poem in there some where.....
5 freak in stars
Bless you! I am grateful to you all for your lovely comments, ratings and favouriting :-*
I love it. More love never hurts though.
Okay, I'll say it again
Beautiful visually and verbally!!!
Design !!! 5-ed .
Buttocks !!! 5-ed .
while this undeniably works as a whole, what caught my interest was the first part; after that i felt there was little room for thought, for my imagination to play. the first part, though, works for me as a brilliant metaphor for revisiting our writing to edit/polish - and how that process can sometimes feel.
With writing like this I want more, lots more.
But extremely enjoyable. It's one of the few poems that I've seen that seem really natural, like it's not trying to show off. Well done, indeed.
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