I thought your poem, and the presentation of it, very clever. Please read my piece, Dear Anonymous.
It is fun and dated and most important of all, it has a beat.
Hide your kids, this guy is a pedophile.
I love the I-perspective in this - and the picture, of course.
keep it up
'Red Ridden Wolf ' ?!?! 5-ed .
I love this one. Short and hotly sweet
even though it has potential. Sweet O.
but the poetry needs work. Sweet O.
Can not agree with your choice of font. Spent a moment wondering why 'deer opens'
do it X and with class, as poetry, eh? but i'd buy the card
the first rhyming couplets i liked
I like this story. Seems to foretell far worse for the poor girl.
The drawing is a bit dark and abstract (woman's torso), but I feel it compliments the poem well. The red dots across the nipple are a nice touch. I also like the emphasis shading.
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