3D Clarity

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Updated 03/17/2021
Created 09/02/2013
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Crystal         Clear

Tinkling                                Bell
      
Sparkling                Mountain                   Brook.

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wakingDownwakingDownalmost 9 years ago
building scenery

In simple and measured matter, the mountain is as clear as the title implies. Mission accomplished, my good man. Mission accomplished. I've a thirst for a glass of nice, cool, mountain stream water now. I suppose that should tell you how well this works.

todski28todski28over 10 years ago
I agree with Remec

however I immediately put ice as the mountain cap in my head, nice work on this one ashesh

GuiltyPleasureGuiltyPleasureover 10 years ago
A lovely.....

and clever spatial. Five from me.

(and not a ! in sight!!!) :-D

RemecRemecover 10 years ago

Very nice...I wasn't sure what to expect from the title, but this works well. (The silly completist in me thinks there should be a capper word in the same position as 'Mountain' but up above 'Crystal Clear' but not certain what would work best.

twelveoonetwelveooneover 10 years ago
5ed

actually a nice experiment.

erectus123erectus123over 10 years ago
graphicly

pleasing, looks like a vagina as well!

Ashesh, the world is going crazy, not just the poets, but also the politicians, what do you think of America getting involved in Syria? I just bought a box of Syria pistachio cookies, so delicate, original and of such high quality. I don't know the answer to my question but please spare the cookie factory. This war thing must be as geneticly coded as out desire to have sex, we don't seem to do without either activity, is it the same genome?

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